Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Marigold (Haiku Series) Comments

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Blooms of Marigold
Nostalgic to my homeland
Still scent the garden.
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Savita Tyagi
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James Mclain 12 December 2016

And if you do have Have the opportunity Raise them up gently

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Savita Tyagi 13 December 2016

Thanks. i believe you are referring to ladybug. This may be just a nice coincidence but after writing and posting my poem next day as I opened the kitchen door there was a little ladybug sitting on the floor. So that it won't get crushed I lifted it up gently and placed it on the grass. Out of no where her appearance filled my heart with wonder. As if she came out of my thoughts. Such is this world filled with little magics.

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Valsa George 10 December 2016

This is really beautiful.....! I don't know why those flowers are not celebrated much! They are so lovely to look at! Yes, tiny lady bugs are seen basking amid their petals! So cute. (10)

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2016

What a lovely and beautiful poem! ..............................................

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M Asim Nehal 01 December 2016

Like pearls in necklace every single haiku stands alone and together they make a crown....thanks for sharing.10++++

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