Mariam, Mariam, Mariam
Aloud in my head your name resonates, 
Reflections of you, your sweetness, your innocence
In a desert like a mirage,
                
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dear anoop, i love the last few lines which succeed to increase the intensity of the poem. sincerely, john.

 
                     
                
I loved it. A ten...keep it up!