Thursday, October 19, 2006

Mariam Comments

Rating: 3.5

Mariam, Mariam, Mariam
Aloud in my head your name resonates,
Reflections of you, your sweetness, your innocence
In a desert like a mirage,
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Princess Me 02 August 2007

I loved it. A ten...keep it up!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 October 2006

dear anoop, i love the last few lines which succeed to increase the intensity of the poem. sincerely, john.

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Anoop Lokkur

Anoop Lokkur

Bangalore
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