Saturday, September 20, 2008

Maria Comments

Rating: 4.6

a girl called maria
which i don`t know
told me to write a poem
about her as though
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Pranab K Chakraborty 02 November 2010

in what law u give me no ink and tell me to draw.... Fantastic curve from passion to intelligence. Post-modern criteria never ends with the existing dilemma.....ask and ask and try to penetrate the origin of art itself. Thank you.10/10 Regards, pranab

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Zahira Shaban 14 September 2010

Oh my, this is by far the best till now!

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 17 September 2009

Sweet, simple and pure, even your normal life is “poetry”

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Obed Souza 14 August 2009

A lovely piece! 10

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Amanda Williams 01 June 2009

this poem is gourgoues and totally sweet

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Sandra Martyres 27 May 2009

A delightful piece...merits a 10++

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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2009

Enchanting. You saw Maria through the panes of your soul. And this is the beautiful result.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Delicate Heart 11 April 2009

iIt's incredible poem. on the divorce, you are a big thing.but it does not sound great, surely cos you are using us language.I know British language is too difficult to you.call me and I can give many hands; do not get me wrong.time and pratise will lead you to mastery in British.the devils with yours.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 March 2009

it seems, right here, you have drawn a poem portrait with the warm ink of your heart...beautiful poem...nicely expressing the inside desire and feel...10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 January 2009

Fantastic....thanks for sharing

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Kristin F 08 January 2009

i love this!

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Maria Sudibyo 07 January 2009

I'm not that Maria but please keep writing a poem. Lovely poem.

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Min Sia 18 November 2008

Your inspiration...Indeed, this is a nice concept..a great poem..so lovely...

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Yasser Koor 22 September 2008

really great poem i like it verey much it is full of meaning nice work... but i wanna tell u to be strong and take it easy, , , , , , , go ahead

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Anjali Sinha 21 September 2008

awh lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! so Maria is your inspiration but tell us which one as there are many here. +10 regards anjali

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Maria Haugen 20 September 2008

Thanks sooo much! I love it! :) And yes everyone; I am his admirer, but not secret though ^^

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Qendresa Ulaj 20 September 2008

say thanks to maria for making you write this cuz its really good.. well done.. :)

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 20 September 2008

Short and sweet poem about Maria.Must be one of your secret admirer.

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Joseph Poewhit 20 September 2008

No ink and draw. Comes acroos very well

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

A nicely composed verse on Maria, last two lines are beautiful.

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