a girl called maria
which i don`t know
told me to write a poem
about her as though
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Sweet, simple and pure, even your normal life is “poetry”
Enchanting. You saw Maria through the panes of your soul. And this is the beautiful result.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
iIt's incredible poem. on the divorce, you are a big thing.but it does not sound great, surely cos you are using us language.I know British language is too difficult to you.call me and I can give many hands; do not get me wrong.time and pratise will lead you to mastery in British.the devils with yours.
it seems, right here, you have drawn a poem portrait with the warm ink of your heart...beautiful poem...nicely expressing the inside desire and feel...10
I'm not that Maria but please keep writing a poem. Lovely poem.
Your inspiration...Indeed, this is a nice concept..a great poem..so lovely...
really great poem i like it verey much it is full of meaning nice work... but i wanna tell u to be strong and take it easy, , , , , , , go ahead
awh lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! so Maria is your inspiration but tell us which one as there are many here. +10 regards anjali
Thanks sooo much! I love it! :) And yes everyone; I am his admirer, but not secret though ^^
say thanks to maria for making you write this cuz its really good.. well done.. :)
Short and sweet poem about Maria.Must be one of your secret admirer.
A nicely composed verse on Maria, last two lines are beautiful.
in what law u give me no ink and tell me to draw.... Fantastic curve from passion to intelligence. Post-modern criteria never ends with the existing dilemma.....ask and ask and try to penetrate the origin of art itself. Thank you.10/10 Regards, pranab