Sunday, December 13, 2009

Mari Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I used to look at you
when you weren't looking,
because I didn't want you
to owe me anything;
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Jon Blanes
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Jon Blanes 17 December 2009

Thank you for your kind words.

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george george 13 December 2009

I read this poem because my daughter is called Mari. It is a beautiful poem, finely crafted from start to finish with a poignant ending. Well done.

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