I remember you, standing before me,
Lined up on the steps of the school,
Offering my insatiable young sight
The seductive vision of your harmonic figure;
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Very nice! Quite a romantic at thirteen. The poem is amazing for such a young age. Well, genius has no age.
well, it's that memory that is dated 50 years.. the poem only 5... :) thank you, Sandra!
Such delightful memories you have depicted in this lovely poem.
thank you, David.. I've appreciated your coming by and commenting on my poems
An enchanting little gen sir.. I love how your poems often show a glimplse of an old memory and the warmth in them.. Beautiful..
point is.. 'memories' help me to survive.. thank you for your kind comment, Souren