Marching Forward Comments

Yes! An enthusiastic yes rang in my mind upon reading this poem. Marching forward, bit by bit, step by step. With some good principles in the heart and a reflective mind, we can make a bit of progress every single day. Kaizen in action. A giant attitude, very poetically expressed in fluent lines.Excellent!

nice work for 14 years old. good effort with rhyming. sometimes more 'perfect rhyming' can make a poem suffer if the poet is paying more attention to rhyming than to the 'story' and to making it enjoyable for the readers. I've sent some suggestions etc. via a message. my favorite lines: The Marching Band This is my clan! thanks for sharing. bri :)