Sunday, October 11, 2020

Marching For Wisdom Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are pure water-bird, we are ducks,
Before sunset we have come back
Towards our home, sweet home
We are marching with prayer to God,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2020

As usual the photograph and your poem go well with each other....definitely it is your love for nature and faith in God that brings out such lovely poems from you...wish you still more brighter future in the coming days Kumarmaniji....5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 October 2020

I cite again a few lines from your amazing poem Marching for Wisdom: We are marching for his wisdom, God is all in all, our father, We love him very much, much we love, We are going to attend evening prayer, In the core heart of middle of temple, Mesmerizing, loveliest created and worded 5 Stars Full Vote!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 October 2020

i read the poem. narration is in sequence thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2020

Ducks musing along! ! ! Beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 13 October 2020

Even birds and fowls have an inbuilt urge to praise God, the great creator of everything! The ducks swimming in water and moving back to their place of rest in disciplined rows are lovely images created by the poet and deeply enhanced by the photograph.

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Douglas Scotney 12 October 2020

thanks for expressing what I never would have thought, Kumar.

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Bill Cantrell 12 October 2020

Just a brilliant poem! ! !

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Denis Mair 12 October 2020

A beautiful moment of connection with humble living things. Their presence at the temple tank is a ceremony of life, just as ours is. From the resonance of life-force, we know the holy spark that leaps across gaps.5 stars for drawing this reader into an impromptu ceremony of innocence.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 October 2020

Tomorrow's sunrise is waiting for us, We shall behold golden pearls tomorrow, Today we pray for the best day ahead, We are now marching for wisdom of God! ............ all creations of the One Creator marching towards the mercy of God to live every moment with peaceful breaths expecting the next with blessed of Him!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 October 2020

Nice one... lovely poem.. loved n liked its contents.. clear 10 With sun's light Monday,12th October 2020 days pass off with not much fuss sometimes loss sometimes gain with no choice Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2020

Using the duck as metaphor you gave us a wonderful poem . We live this life swimming in this world by struggling to meet our daily needs and at the s as me time we also enjoy our work. Each new day brings new challenges and we pray and work to please our Master. Lovely poem. 10*****

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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