March On March...... Comments

That was a wonderful read. For the first time I didn't want to finish quickly and comment for I was lost in your metaphors. Gives a sad sort feeling in some places but loved the ending with a courage to march. even the title is most enticing. Lovely rhythm. I loved the sounds of stops. Have no right to rate this piece of artistic qualities

What a wonderful poem Karen....I really enjoyed the read :)

Novel write Karen, very inspired.

Love the rhyme, love the flow, love the emotion, I'd better go!

I enjoyd d quirky twist in dis wonderful sublime poem! Kudos poetess.

T.S Elliot said April was the cruelest month I guess it has a sister

Beautiful and lyrical I am impressed. BB : O)