Thursday, December 31, 2015

Marbles Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Tat, tat, tat, down the alleyway.
Soaring marbles, having fun.
Gone, gone, gone, are the days we play.
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Jay Porter
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Wes Vogler 05 June 2016

Reads very well Jay. I find myself interested in piecing a story together from it. Nice rhythm almost a skipping rope beat. I hope the memories are fond ones.

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