She captures the eye of the dark horse.
Something about the intensity
in which they glare
that hypnotizes her,
...
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Hey what can I say.. there was passion behind these words. I had a particular muse in mind at the time. lol Thank you Greg. Joyce
Joyce, IMHO, your best poetic piece, thus far. You've upped the lexicon this time round and what a wonderful conclusion.
Wendy thank you so much.. no better compliment than 'wow' this one was inspired *wink Red
Great ending, Joyce... you packaged this poem brilliantly. Really awesome! Brian