Saturday, April 22, 2006

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Rating: 4.5

She captures the eye of the dark horse.
Something about the intensity
in which they glare
that hypnotizes her,
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Joyce Chelmo
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Brian Dorn 23 October 2006

Great ending, Joyce... you packaged this poem brilliantly. Really awesome! Brian

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Joyce Chelmo 26 April 2006

Hey what can I say.. there was passion behind these words. I had a particular muse in mind at the time. lol Thank you Greg. Joyce

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Gregory Gunn 26 April 2006

Joyce, IMHO, your best poetic piece, thus far. You've upped the lexicon this time round and what a wonderful conclusion.

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Joyce Chelmo 22 April 2006

Wendy thank you so much.. no better compliment than 'wow' this one was inspired *wink Red

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