Tum saath the
Toh manzil bhi paas tha,
Lehron se bhare samandar mein
Kinara nazar aa raha tha,
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I cannot follow the Hindi version as I have studied hardly any Hindi. But the translation, I enjoyed much. Even in the face of adversities, problems appeared surmountable with a strong hand to assist! But when you lost that grip, dreams and hopes shifted out of focus. Still you are not totally disheartened... there is hope of both of you getting united in another life!
Apki kavita ne dil ko chhu liya...bahut hi khubsurati se apne ye kavita likhi aur iski mai jitni tarif karu wo kam hai. : -)
An excellent write Kaavya.. I think its Hindi version is still more fine a write..I wish A VERY VERY HAPPY DIWALI to you