Thursday, October 3, 2013

Manzil.........(Destination) Comments

Rating: 2.6

Tum saath the
Toh manzil bhi paas tha,
Lehron se bhare samandar mein
Kinara nazar aa raha tha,
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Kavya .
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Dinesan Madathil 02 November 2013

An excellent write Kaavya.. I think its Hindi version is still more fine a write..I wish A VERY VERY HAPPY DIWALI to you

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 October 2013

Destination a fantastic poem both way as destination

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Wahab Abdul 06 October 2013

wonderful poetry..love it...

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Yasmin Khan 05 October 2013

A beautiful song-like love poem

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Valsa George 03 October 2013

I cannot follow the Hindi version as I have studied hardly any Hindi. But the translation, I enjoyed much. Even in the face of adversities, problems appeared surmountable with a strong hand to assist! But when you lost that grip, dreams and hopes shifted out of focus. Still you are not totally disheartened... there is hope of both of you getting united in another life!

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Abhishek Mishra 03 October 2013

Apki kavita ne dil ko chhu liya...bahut hi khubsurati se apne ye kavita likhi aur iski mai jitni tarif karu wo kam hai. : -)

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