Sunday, March 19, 2006

Many Vain Attempts At Escape Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I arrived in Mike’s under the Stillwell Avenue
subway station I spotted Abie drinking a Bud
two empty cans already on the counter
surprised to see him at eleven in the morning
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Charles Chaim Wax
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... ... 26 March 2006

excellent, pretty much an accumulation of several things you do right in your poems and them all happening at the same time within one very good poem.

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Poetry Hound 20 March 2006

Another great snippet. Sure would like to know what the box is.

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Brian Dorn 19 March 2006

As always, Charles, you keep the reader riveted. Brian

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Uriah Hamilton 19 March 2006

Charles, you're a great compassionate poet but maybe sometimes there is not a way out...

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Patricia Gale 19 March 2006

It is not an easy thing to escape, to runaway from or ignore. It is there and must be dealt with. Hopelessness and sadness all in one Charles. Patricia

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