Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, April 22, 2015

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The doors must be kept open
As home is like heaven
Where anybody can drop in
And feel homely to usher in
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2015

xLovely poem 22 Apr by moeze lalji | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2015

xDate & Time: 4/22/2015 8: 17: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 42059205 - Highly Impressed Member: Birgitta Abimbola Heikka Comment: Nice poem. Just two suggestions. Line 2, did you mean separated by none instead of one. Last line, I think it would read better if you said and treated you not casual. 7 hours ago by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2015

Manish Doshi likes this. welcome Just now · Unlike · 1 6 hours ago

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 April 2015

This reads like a great welcome song.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2015

The doors must be kept open As home is like heaven

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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