Wednesday, September 20, 2006

Many Times In My Life Comments

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Many times in my life I have disappointed you,
and begun to stray.
But you have pointed me in the right direction,
and sent me on my way.
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farzana hossain
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Steve Hagget 20 September 2006

Excellent poem with great use of language, Steve

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Jimmy Watkinson 20 September 2006

Gosh, what a wonderful piece. The emotive imagery brought a tear into my eye. Utterly fabulous indeed. jw

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Kee Thampi 20 September 2006

Many times I've needed support, and to know someone was there. It was you who held me up, and showed me how to care. very nice poem

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