Saturday, June 30, 2018

Many Of Me Comments

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Many Of Me

Many of me to make me happy
to help me survive or be consoled
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Aqua Flower
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Robert Murray Smith 15 July 2018

Many like minded help console. Thoughtful poem Aqua Flower. Reread and appraised. Robert

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Aqua Flower 18 July 2018

Thanks Robert for visiting this one again. This poem conveys a vulnerable side of me.

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Bri Edwards 14 July 2018

Aqua Flower, since yesterday i've had two thoughts i want to share, the second one only occurring to me after returning here and rereading the Poet's Notes. 1 - your Me, in Many of Me, could stand for Many emotions, which is what i was thinking last night at bedtime. 2 - now i wonder if Me stands for girls i.e. female individuals in your life, friends, relatives, co-workers et al who may help you through it all. ? ? bri :)

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Aqua Flower 15 July 2018

Many of Me, represents the many emotions that make up me! But #2 can influence those emotions so I guess number 2 can be a part of the many of me! You are such a thinker! lol

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Bri Edwards 14 July 2018

many of me is an interesting name for what i think you are calling emotions, your chosen poem topic. i'm stumped by this: to send my anger upon a name, BUT perhaps it means you vent your anger-emotion by using names/words e.g. You! .... F++k Off! ! ! ...BAST+RD! ! ! .....You CREEP! ! favorite lines: many of me you will come to know to help me release emotions that have to go! ...............nice one. bri :) to MyPoemList

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Aqua Flower 14 July 2018

Hello and thank you for visiting many of me! I'm happy you liked it! To send my anger upon a name means I name the emotion anger until it disappears cause I don't like it! Like a enemy that you want to get rid of! :)

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

Aqua Flower, a universal poem that shares emotions we all have.++10

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