Monday, February 23, 2009

Many Can Move From Side To Side Comments

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Many can move from side to side,
Some can move diagonally,
Making it easy to run or hide,
But a pawn I shall always be.
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Alex waters
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

This is a fine poem with wonderful rhymes. The flow is not the best because the rhythm never materializes but the story is a fine one. A very clever and creative story is played out here. I liked it. GW62

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