Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Manuscript 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gates of Ulu Mosque were opened wide
white gown pilgrims were going to Develi Tomb
Genclik Park was built in heartwarming spirit
why Love lay sleeping under Kapuzbasi Waterfall?
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Marieta Maglas 17 October 2009

Excellent poem dedicated to Nizamettin...10++++++++++

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Louis Rams 16 October 2009

i am truly amazed at the places that you speak of, as if you had been to all these places in a past existence. a ten just on the places unknown to so many of us.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Manuscript 2 stomped me-some of the history I don't know. I'll have to read it again. thanks for sharing

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Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

sounds a little too foreign for me...but i can always visit later....

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Noel Horlanda 15 October 2009

Where are these places? Surely Ahmad you're a well traveled man and a historian at that? Surely, these places mentioned in every line of this well crafted piece are gone forever, dissipated and probably part of the ancient manuscript long before Alex the Great was born. I find it strange though, well any way I find this manuscript of yours interesting.

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Obinna Eruchie 14 October 2009

Every line written is beautiful to read.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 October 2009

wonderful and imaginative!

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The Lost.. 14 October 2009

this is wonderfull ahmed :) keep writing and thanx for the invitations..

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Joseph Poewhit 14 October 2009

Names in the poem fascinated me.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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