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i liked this poem very much......i think it inspires me.....like the poems that i read for the old classical famous poets.....good job my friend.... read (my paradise) after enhancing.....

wonderful dedication, wonderful historical symbolistic poem, lovely to read.............10+++++++++

i believe the volcano vesuvius still exists in naples italy, and the firebirds as i see them are the guardians who brave their souls for the mother that they know. i am truly honored for this dedication. your co poet and friend always. a double ten- one for you and one for me.

An excellent historical poem you dedicated to a poet friend. Fine job a 10

manuscript of the ancient history, the Grego-Roman glorious days. I like the second line in the first stanza - fire birds are chirping on the stairs of Vesuvius. According to my own interpretation fire birds could be the melting hot lava that Madam Vesuvius puked out from her mouth and covertly crawling down below her foot. In another way, fire birds could be hawks, eagles, falcon looking males serenading strangely in front of Ms. Venus' lovely home or she's stood admiring them all on her balcony. At any rate, whatever it is I love this piece, the way it's written. Cheers! 10+

Beautiful dedication as usual that has lovely lines such as these 'dusty pathways seducing endlessly / fire birds are chirping on the stairs of Vesuvius / grinding love down from its trembling cage / let them prove their brave souls fights on War of Antiochos...'

very good! ...............

First verse of this sonata filled me with desire to read on - - and was not disappointed Ahmad..... a lovely flowing dedication.....10 + ++ Fay

I'm not quite clued up on these expressions Will try again later.The word content is interesting.

Captures moments well

WoW! ! ! Ahmad you are making a wonderful dedication......You have written hundreds of it....Thus I name you Poet of Sonata.........: 0)