Manu And The I-T Girl .... [a Modernized Version Of ' Manu And The Snake'; Inspired By A P H Friend; Short; One Story Of ' Modern India'] Comments

So, we discover another kind of snake in Mumbai- -the kind who cheats on his wife. You've written a decent poem here, mainly because it's interesting, unusual, and maybe even a little off-beat. (and I don't mean meter.) It's interesting you chose to end your poem with a reference to being on the lamb. I wanted to believe this is an attempt at a double entendre... (diet?) but failed to convince myself that's what I was seeing... Very creative piece of work, bri.

Yes, this version of the story sounds quite sweet and more probable! With IT industry flourishing in India, most of the IT professionals lead a rather comfortable life! Hope Manu's and Elsa's friendship will fruition into a life long relationship! Great rhyming as ever!

Nice poem about the relationships in your city Mumbai, Thank you for sharing.