Manners Make Fortune (Translation) Comments

Love & is a superb poem. I enjoyed it, thanks

good job, keep it up.

i like the way you have used the terms love and by distinctively describing the differences between them. Also am liking the lay out, so unique and on-point.

This is lovely urdu poetry read in English I love Urdu know none but I do compose tootie fruity like this khyaal humkoe unka aaj bhee aata hai khuda zane woh kahan hain kya unhe humara bhee khyaal aataa hai ALLAH heee zane'' Thanks for this chance

great use of words, and so true :)

Manners and fortune are extremely close relatives, as every poor deserves hunger.........Beautiful words! I am happy that you have put it in English alongwith Urdu! I feel all your Urdu pieces can get better visibility if you always put some English Scripts as you have done here! You are absolutely a brilliant poet! Pray God bless you always!

You should take advantage of urdu language, O Punjabi youth if you have to face a misfortunate. Because it is a healing agent against the scars induced by bullet-like words. It is a well emphasized maxim of a fortunate person..... touching expression. Nicely translated. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

Great! A wonderful poem..Manners and fortunes are extremely close relatives. Captivating opening line protecting the brief piece of work all along...very nicely narrated. I loved it..! !

Beautifully composed as a welcome song having deepest feeling and full of wisdom.

Full of wisdom.We Chinese say friendliness is conducive to business success.

Bachpan se sunte aye hayN- - - - - -Ba adab ba naseeb- - - - - - -beadab benaseeb.............Aapne ise ek khoobsoorat ghazal-e-musalsal bana diya.

Our language tells so many things about us.Even if we say few words our manner of talking reveals our personality, .Soft words and good demeanor certainly win hearts.It is because of this certain language, words or vocabularies are chosen for certain occasions like in a royal presence, court or special occasions.Even in our day-to-day interaction, language play a great role for good r relationships and enhancing our social standing. A great piece of work.Thanks for sharing.