Sunday, October 12, 2014

Manna Comments

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In this earth many creatures do live in,
In mind some are weak and some are keen.
Some live in water and some on soil,
Man is social animal and has to toil. [1]
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2019

(2) .......Most appreciated, Sir. You are the Manna on PH, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Truly, I mean that. Manna the word to always remember.It´s all there is: God´s Bliss. Thank you for the Manna, Sir. A myriad of 10´s. I remember Jesus with His disciples and the manna. Wondrous beautifully presented.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2019

WOW! This is a poem created on Sunday the 12th of October 2014. I was already here on the 13th of December 2011, but never active until the year of 2017. MANNA, a word that I know too well, but it´s perfectly stated here and good for us all to read this precious document-poem about Manna and for me to read as well.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 November 2018

In human beings some people save nature, God provides them manna and also nurture. //// great writing with pure faith on GOD

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 October 2014

Great write Sir.Lot to learn from you.

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Paul Sebastian 17 October 2014

A beautiful rhyming poem on how man will be blessed when he takes the route to help others and obey God's law. Words give images and you have cleverly weaved them to give a vivid picture. I particularly liked the last conclusive stanza. Great, you chose to use 'manna' to remind man of what once happened in the desert when they complained - 'rumbled' - and grumbled for food. Great write. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2014

Let's be good to others and help them Let be kind in bringing peace and fem. Let's work hand to hand in right path, God will provide manna peace on Earth. [6] An universal message, a lovely poem.

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Md Asadullah 12 October 2014

Ameen, Wonderful prayer. you ended the poem with beautiful last paragraph: - - Let's be good to others and help them Let be kind in bringing peace and fem. Let's work hand to hand in right path, God will provide manna peace on Earth

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