Mankind In Danger Comments

nice, maybe u r touched by the war against syria.

A well crafted piece, love the form and the sentiment.

really really perfect! i love the subjects of ur poems...it's a particular poem...thank u...thank u...and...hey! ! i'm a fan of u: D

i'm pretty sure you mean glock, not clot; get your mind off of medical subjects, my friend! angles who cure the children with a kiss? ...i know you mean to write angels; i've seen this mistake before somewhere. darn old language! and you only gave first name of w.s.; maybe that was meant and is sufficient. i like when you have trouble rhyming (i guess) and write something like this: Missiles doesn't rhythm good, I know But how can the humanity be saved, how? HEY! i just noticed you wrote rhythm. i thought it was rhyme. i sometimes have trouble finding a good rhyme and then i explain that to the reader as you have done. but i MUST point out: although know and now(or how) are almost identical in spelling, to me they don't rhyme so well. maybe you didn't really mean for them to rhyme so well. it is good anyway. thanks for sharing. i could say more but am pressed for time and have said enough anyway for this nice poem. bri p.s. i especially like the line: If the humanity got the holes of destroying like the moon….

a nice poem about peace and humanity peace must be realized within and amplified then comes out to fulfil the realization/ war is not a solution yet we go and chose the war and what we do ..kill the human kind the best creation by Allah you know war I call it W=walk A =aggressively and R=rape the humanity/the line which you wrote gave me a bit blurriness Who likes to destroy the ** buds of May**? thought about the women the roses...well work and I appreciate and accept the universal call thank you