Thursday, June 17, 2021

Mankind Comments

Rating: 3.5

Mankind, should be united as one great family
With all races, creeds, colours, spiritual beliefs in harmony
Minds ever questing, seeking for new achievements
Trying to make the world a better healthier home
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Colin Ian Jeffery
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Luis A. Estable 17 June 2021

This poem mixes various aspect of what the voice thinks is true in the same thought. I advice to organize them in a clearer and more poetry-like manner

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