Friday, October 12, 2018

Manipulate Comments

Rating: 4.7

I will not allow you to manipulate
my feelings are justified
your actions hurt and berate
leaving me to contemplate
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

you changed the story to manipulat me I will not be hurt again I see a stop sign at this roads end........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2018

I will not allow you to manipulate my feelings are justified your actions hurt and berate leaving me to contemplate should I stay or should I leave.....poignant tale wonderfully expressed! I can feel the emotions of the poetess! (10)

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Carl Roussell 12 October 2018

Love can blind an individual to the truth in a relationship. One should not have to bury themselves instead of being acknowledged for the person they are.

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