Manila, recently dead
Bowed under by a heavy yellow cloud
Forest transported in its midst struggled
But soon black soot effaced the green
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you did the right thing..a strong message you have conveyed throughout the land..Nice piece
Manila is an old city. The commerce and the action have now transferred to Makati, Mandaluyong, Alabang etc. What is ldeft of Manila are the small busineses and superannuated buildings. It is a city now in grave neglect.
A vivid write about Manila into demise...something to be done to make Manila lively again and hope awareness is on with the People who lives within and make the city great again..great piece...10
Your comments are most appreciated, Meggie