Monday, June 7, 2010

Manifest Destiny Comments

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I'm the richer, among these thieves
A mighty gem, scattered the world over
A world overlord, looking over the waters
For beyond these shores I'm assured to own others
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Darrin McMiller Jr.
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Adam Fuller 14 June 2010

I like this one a lot. I love how it establishes both beginning and end, as well as potential, and at the end, loss. Great poem.

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Rachel Brewer 07 June 2010

I really like this poem, would love it if you could check out some of mine. thanks xxx

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