Saturday, September 27, 2008

Mangrief Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wy do I feel guilty
When I see them grieve for her?
When I see the men shaking,
Clenching, fighting the need
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Lynda Robson 10 October 2008

Excellent Kevin, so observant of a man holding back the tears and pain, 10 for this Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm 10 October 2008

This is a superb write Kev. You are masterful in your descriptive language. 'Throats as raw as soul' is a unique phrase.10+ + + from me.

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Kevin Eaglesfield

Kevin Eaglesfield

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