Mangoes (A Children's Poem) Comments

Thanks Sri Pathak ji for reviewing the poem and having liked it. It is such words as these that keeps a poet motivated.

One might feel it is easy to write poems for children. Believe me, it is not. I've tried, and it is harder still. Mangoes, mangoes Ripe and sweet, A hot summer's treat, beautiful, dear poet.

Mango trees are dangling down and children are dancing in joy. They are feeling the breeze. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

well penned! Keep writing! 10