Mango Butterflies Comments

really nice descriptive words....really paints a picture in the mind :)

Romantic. Good piece.

extreme emotions ///// a very beautiful poem to read! ! ! ! ! !

Wow marvelous expressions of passion, frm d dilating iris to tango, i say u did a superb job of it in poem! Pls do review my latest too, on Nature.

This is so beautiful in its whole form from the first stanza all the through to the last line leaving me to want to read more...well written excellent penmenship

the pain unbearable, will I survive to taste your lips and eat your words and turn your curves in silky tango exhaling moments deep, into your eyes you're sweet… as mango butterflies towards the end you become passionate. thank you very much for this gift of a poem

A very sensual poem indeed. Very well expressed.

A very steamy and provocative poem. I loved this line, ' and turn your curves in silky tango exhaling moments deep, into your eyes you're sweet… as mango butterflies you're sweet as…… I think you're in love Marcus!

Much sensuous waiting. Illustrated well. Emotion less rather construction getting its superiority. So it can't be much intense by its passion. Nice post.

it's written passionately in a nice flow.

It is beautiful. Emotions are fine and delicately woven. You made a nice art work: -)

The title is fantastic and the poem take us to a sweetness unbearable. We see the intense desire hidden in each stanza. Very sensual poem! ! ! ! I loved it! ! ! !

this is more complicated than some poems for me to quickly comment on as much as i feel i should. especially since you asked that i read it and your bio requests feedback. so i'll just say now that it is catchy. it has a pleasant flow to it (slowed a bit by my trying to follow the meaning at times) . i like the internal rhymes i think i found. in the last two lines, did you mean your or you're? thanks for sharing. i'll try to get back to it someday after my fun outdoors. been at computer too longgggggggggggg. :)

A beautiful poem, Marcus-look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing- Claudia