Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Mango Blooms And Cuckoos- Haiku 5 Comments

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Bharati Nayak 11 February 2019

Spring ends, birds desert- - All attractions are seasonal- -This poem is notewothy in the valentine fever.

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Thank you very much Bharati Nayak. Every fascination has a life, an expiry date after which the fascination becomes ineffective. Thank you for reminding

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2018

This is really a very fine poem.. really poetic and bringing in the great joy of your heart and the beauty....... thank u. dear Poet. Parameswaran tony

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Thank you Tony for the good comments

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Prabha Nair 20 November 2018

well written. Spring will come again... mango blooms with wither again too. Nothing lasts for ever.

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Thank you Prabha. We can hear cuckoos in the Spring when the mango trees bloom

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Devi Krishnakumar 16 November 2018

Well written. It portrays the migration of cuckoos in spring followed by their departure. In its more deeper sense, it says that attractions will not last forever. It is highly dynamic.

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Thank you Devi. Life is happy appearance and unhappy disappearance

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S H 14 November 2018

You must know that the format of haiku/ Senryu is in 5-7-5 Syllable, Haiku is about the nature and senryu is about the relationship. Please Google the definition and learn the format and check the sample. Thanks. SH

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Thank you SH. A correction is incorporated. Please make a second look

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