Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Mangalyaan -Mom's In Mars! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Indian MOM is in Mars!
This is no fantasy;
Next will be only stars;
This is our policy.
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Wes Vogler 01 December 2015

Nicely phrased, Dr Manohar I shall investigate your work further. almost a 10 but lousy first stana rhyme

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