Child, its late, are you awake?
Ill pull up quilt and just fake.
He would walk away saying no hurry.
It’s bright and sunny but not to worry.
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Without vision revelation cannot come. A very deep write. Well done!
Fathers don't tell - 'how to live' They live and show, what life is... to live. Being a child of that father Dear poet, you owe a lot and you paid them. We all know you, and the power in your pen Today, we all can add the grace to bow to your father too. Its not just flesh and blood relation Its a relation of imbibing great essence of life from him. Love you dear poet, you are excellent here The Sense of Esteem, is at its peak. So is the wealth of this write.
A wonderful tribute to your father! The last line raises several moral, religious and ethical issues! People in general do not want a girl child! And unfortunately advances in medical science is helping them to eradicate the girl child! Apart from proper education and equal rights, threre is a pressing need to Change our Attitude towards girl child! 10 + -Raj
A poem par excellence with an autobiographical touch and flowing tribute to a noble father. His vision reflects in your thoughts and actions too. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of literature and life. CP
lovely meaningful poem..................perfect as always! ! ! m10
A wonderful tribute to your father. I was lucky to have a dad as insightful as yours and I miss him every day. I enjoyed your special poem. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
It is sad how girl children, are not treated fairly in some families. Quite an interesting story. Narrated so well in style, so pleasing to read with musical tones in the background. You are right. All fathers may not be like that, but there are many who are so fond of their daughters. Atleast my daughter thinks so. For the poem and for highlighting the issue 10+++...
mamtaji, my soul is struck with the last line... sure, it's the soul of your poem........ sad, why didn't poets see that?
People say girls are more attached to their fathers and boys to their mother. How true! Even I feel I am more attached to my daughter. We talk, we play, we fight for chacholates etc.etc. What a tender poem on father and daughter relation. I'm so touched.
Thats what Dads are for....and much more. Says a lot about your personality as a function of your relationship with your Dad.... This was....way to go.....! ! Cheers. Subroto
A tribute to a world class father. So gracious, affectionate, and touching. Such great human beings are irreplacable. I had one too. Blessings to you, dear friend. Love, SandraX
the men still have vision but there's a tele attached to it getting myopic day by day degenrating bit by bit read my poem called The Idiot and the box....
I just somersaulted down memory lane double speed to think of my late father (with bleary eyes) powerful blessed love flows out from this piece with superior rhyme and rhythm! brilliantly brings out the bightness of fatherhood! ...Your poem brought tears as I remember my own Dad…whom I lost recently and the wounds are too fresh and too raw… That besides …… ...a very sweet poem indeed, a stunning tribute to your dear Pa. Nicely written. beautiful and touching……. I genuinely appreciated it… ya they don’t make em like they used to….prophetic….wish we are half the parents that providence threw at us… the poem is awesome and done with such ease and flow …you just go on and on…want to do it over and over again…. Mind you ….very rare that… cheers and ten
I really think you have experienced the most blissful side of childhood with parents. You poetry deserves a 100 plaudits.
You are a great daughter of a great man! ! Intense sacred love feelings came out from this piece with fine rhyme and rhythm! Wonderfully disclosed the bightness of your dad who was an honourable man! Praisworthy indeed your heartfelt verses that can enlighten reader! ! 10++++
this is precisely a beautiful collection my dear..this composition is so nice, ,
How wonderful! Remembering the virtues of you dad. Nicely written.
ma'm, a very beautiful and touching poem...you bring such affection to your poems...I genuinely loved it...10
what if god has broken the mould your dad has left himself behind...in you a lovely tribute mam...i know dad to a girl means a lot..this poem brought both my parents to mind..fantastic human beings they were...a very sweet poem
Loved the way u represented a visonary man..a pioneer poetry