Man Vs Wild! . Comments

Narrative diction …plans 1 and 2…both had to compromise…= harmony 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

a very unusual idea and very cleverly penned....great

well penned dear poet...however one thing amazed me and that is the title itself. in fact the title depict the image of a man and a snake as one- the man-snake alike which on literary genre it seems a combinations of being and character: man- as the being, snake as associated to wisdom and wit.

Topics variegated, as always. Reality put forward with powerful command of words.

A very nice poem.. Impressive and well penned.. A good descripition.. Its WONDERFUL..10++

A nice piece, well written.

very impressive..vivid description of man vs wild of fear vs courage!

Fear and courage always make bedfellows interesting.

Interesting... no comment =P

impressive indeed! and fine wording! images are WoW! 10+

fear and stupidity seem to walk hand in hand. first the man takes his stand and makes the snake turn and run but then the snake uses his stupidity and turns to face a larger agressor and in turn makes the larger agressor turn and run. stupidity made them stay, and fear made them run. (this is my own view) just like INDIRA said 'who's afraid of who? a good write and a brain teaser. a ten

who's afraid of whom?

Firstly your style of writing is very impressive and effective.Every time it makes me to visualize the whole theme of your write. Nice and keep it going.

nice poem, well penned

my friend, I have apposing thumbs, and am not so afraid of snakes that the snake would not be my next meal! The snake has the right to be, but when the snake poses a threat to man the snake will loose every time. thanks for the ponder, and well penned 10+++

This raised a smile my friend...a fine collection you're writing Surya...each new piece reflects a different side to your work......Very well penned 10

a nice and interesting story related here in this poem. thanks for sharing.

wow this is a great fight it like watching animal planet keep up the great work

I think you know tamil. 'Pambu enral padaiyum nadungum' is the proverb for which the poem has given a definition. Nice capturing of the scene.

very nice i hope one day have that many up here four thumbs up