Wednesday, December 3, 2008

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there's so much pain in the world today
man out to take the other out of his way
he wanders from time to time to find his prey
he has grown in his killing way
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Jasjiv Singh
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James Mclain 03 December 2008

I am not much for fancy words so I agree with her below... :)

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Love the ending the most but the whole poem is great runs well together very moving... Great expressions also.. ~Krista~

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Jasjiv Singh

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