Friday, May 11, 2012

Man (To A Woman) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A woman that needs the arms of a man
Will constantly be colliding into doors
If she expects wolves to change clothes
Then all she will wear are tears in her throat
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2022

Wolves never change clothes... elephants always take foods without brushing teeth. Your poem has muli layers of meaning. It's a wonderful poem. Top score

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