Thursday, March 21, 2019

Man Since Cave Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's too cool here and for long,
Let's warm it up a wee bit.
And too dull for my liking,
Someone said adding to that,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2019

Liked the two closure lines. I concur with your clever thought. Very perceptive lines, a trademark of your Poet's Pen. Liked.the Poet's Nores too. So very true. 10++++++++and.on to my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 March 2019

Thank you again, Rose Marie, you have been liberal.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2019

Wow, what a wonderful and insightful poem. Beautiful and excellent presentation of the realities of life. It conveys in brilliant detail the ways on how men tread the life from cave to high technology.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 March 2019

Thank you Rose marie, the story of man's muddling is long. Only a poem can make it short.

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