Man's Immortal Sculpture Comments

An interesting attempt at the set form and a reminder just how difficult it can be to both rhyme and make sense. The line 'No wave can crush a stone enclosed with bog.' is most interesting, as it seems to be saying, to paraphrase, carve your name on a stone, encase it in mucky ground and no wave will break it. A stone 'that have no stain' would soon pick a few up from a bog!

Very creative & deep.

Reflective and well written.

A mature poem. Great imagery wth deep content.Well done! ; D

Nicely written poem. Keep writing and sharing. As a young lad what do you think of my poems.?

Beautifully meaningful poem. Like a poem written by a forty-year-old who has been writing since he was twelve. Continue, Omar!

very precious poem with a great lesson behind.whatever you achieve / wherever you did it / whatever your excuses are / there is only one thing to make of great benefit./ that, if you are interested to find, you probably, if lucky, find in the last two couplets. thanks omar for the kind invitation.

I'm glad that we as human beings can capture the art of the world around us, and forever be preserved in history. You are an inspiring write Omar. Thanks again, Marina.

Excellent write and well expressed poem. The title is perfect. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

The perfect name for the perfect poem. Indeed one of the best poems i have read! I definitely rate it a 10!

bravo my friend... perfect theme... perfect lines! wow... you amazed me again! nice thoughts here... rated it 10

Nicely set into the lines of thought. You did well on this. I love that it brings pictures and thoughts to mind while reading it. Thank you for sharing. Deborah

To carve the hardest stone you need great might You must be patient if for God you yearn That's why on scenic sculptures they shed light at ur young age u hve so much of wisdom in you and naturally in u r poems. wonderful indeed. thank u for inviting me.

definitely a must read!

Ohh myy such a great poem omar! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++10! ! ! ! !

Just a mirror Poet has placed in front of us. Simply not a poem, perhaps conscience has been painted by words with right and calculated diction. Bravo. Only in 9, if poet's appearance proves the mastery, then reader can imagine the shinning brightness of such a talent in long run. Awaiting for next. Warm regards, 10+ pranab

Omar, you did a great job on writing your first sonnet. You might want to edit it a little closer. Keep up the good work. Lynn

Good write well expressed........

well my wise friend, this is perfect. i'm really helpless to speak and i can say nothing about it, here we a have a philosopher with us great work really great work. 'this is not irony this is an extreme truth'

Good work Omar...your young writing pen has a matured poetic ink inside...10