Man’s Best Friends As Crossing Guards Comments

Superb like the supersonic train...your description blotches the reader's heart with those colourful similies10+++

very strong and effective poetic expressions sir...nice one/...liked it very much 10++

incredible. want to read it over and over, thank you. some of it is hard to understand but I think thats a good thing

Dear Mr Hebert, 'Man's best friend as crossing guard' is a unique poem with beautiful imagery, nice flow of words, which forces one to read it loud and let them sink in the heart.. 'like a thin thread the man-made centepede waned effortlessly' or 'supersonic train walked slowly as if a glamorous fashion show was taken place' and it reaches it's crescendo when you say'two dogs came running like crossing guards' we know the poetry has reached its ultimate. Thanks for sharing A10 from me Incidentally, other two I have commented upon on 21/03& 22/03me.-Rajkumar

These lines struck me like a roaring waves strike Water all over treasure beneath At the end, a meditating saint moving with wave Chanted a word of truth. Nice expressions and flow of words. The theme 'guards' lovely. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

so real poem... the man made centipede. i loved reading this.

nice One...Dogs are not just pet, but man's best friend as well....nice write...

good 10+ good luck

Really interesting Poem... Multiple read Material!

This is a lovely write. The imagery is distinctive and the plot is clearly developed. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

meaningful through a mind which tried to reach a point.. beautiful dear poet.. keep on.. hazem al..

A nice write! An enjoyable reading! Thanks for sharing.

this is poetry at its best.Thank you for sharing

Good imagery and use of metaphor. Unique. I liked it.

very nice to ponder on........ beautifully penned.......

Cute...Very pictorial. T

Woah.. Simply..Beautiful.. Love the Description....

Wow! What a wonderful story about man's best friends. It is an amazing story and you have told it in an interesting way. A ten from me. Karin Anderson

Very good and descriptive! .

deeeeeeeep! i like such meaningful poem! i can hear my heart shouting with your anger! two thumbs up!