Man's Ages In Sun's Stages Comments
As the sun rises from horizon arc,
So does man rises from womb dark.
As sun gives out its tender rays,
So does child charms in innocent ways.
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spectacular view of our blessed cycle experience it all AS IS now! ! !
Life circles are indeed beautifull, from stars to wheather, from moss to man, like different poems of the same cosmic theme. Nicely penned and chanted, as most of yours Abdulrazak. Thanks for sharing it all!
Fascinating poem, written is such elegant manner. I perceive it like a flood of light invading every aspect of human life.10+++
A beautiful poem.................................................10
As is the father so is the son...marvelous poem and marvelous title..congratulations Abdul and thanks for all your comments
So beautiful with word power and imagination in the poem.
You have brought out a striking parallel between the Sun and the Man! Man's life on Earth is like the time span and the changes from sunrise to sunset! After its duties and resolution. As sun enters the earth 's womb, So does man enters the tomb.............. these last three lines are particularly enjoyable!
Hats off to this wonderful concept. Man's Ages In Sun's Stages - each line is so true, so deep in meaning. Great write!
This is a lovely and an inspiring write, I really enjoyed reading it today.
Fantastic comparison among human life and sun beam. Marvellous depiction. An intensive and didactic poem that I like most. The last two lines are more impressive.Many thanks dear Abdulrazak, may God increase your poetic imagination.....10
A beautiful comparison of the sun rising to sunset with the cycle of a mans life. Thanks-10
As the poem depict our life in comparison with a day long sun experience, Our whole life just like a day, It rises like sun, dominate the earth and disappears as quickly as it appeared. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful comparison of sun and its illuminating rays- from sunrise to sunset- with that of man and his life. A rare concept woven into a lovely poem!
Very nice comparison between the sun and the son/daughter/child........Loved it....10
A very nicely conceived and written piece, Abdulrazak. I like being compared with the sun
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7/29/2025 3:43:23 PM # 1.0.0
Fulfilling its duty to enlighten the earth. Great work!