Man On A Train Comments

Another comment left for this poem on Write Out Loud: " One of the finest pieces of poetry I've read in a while. So concise yet so powerful! "

more comments for this poem from Write Out Loud: " Really clever, short simple but saying so much." " Certainly eye-catching in its content - creating a range of reactions (and questions?) in the reader's mind."

Hi, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem Man On A Train. I wrote of a man with his head in his hands and later we see the man is me - the abstract metaphor of being sat three seats behind suggests a disconnect and a struggle to keep up (with life) hence being sat with head in hands.

Thanks for commenting on my poem Man On A Train, much appreciated., .,