Man Of Sorrows Comments

Profound thought. Nicely composed. great narration.

wonderful rational poem, well penned with deep thoughts, lovely to read......10++++++++

Poetic poignancy expressed with stunning eloquence....Stanzaic movement glides mellifluously...Solid crafting, indeed! FjR

'Brought as a lamb Oh poor child Only to be slaughtered In this brutal world, A sheep before his shearers'... These lines are meaningful expressive poetic...beautiful poem Noel...both in its philosophy and in composition...thanks...10

And goodness shall prevail! Sir, your poem tells the truth about the world... very beautiful! Thanks.

Come into this world Oh naked child. Rachel Ann Butler

Done no violence No deceit in his mouth Yet offered his life To save his race Annihilation from sin Righteous servant is he Shall be satisfied at the end...........no words may portray the childhood. we consider it so innocent age we always wish it to come back... nice piece and masterly stroke....10 read mine innocence regained.... martyres...smiley

WOW! Noel you amazed me with this theme so eloquent yet well formed and structured.............great figurative language used! ! ! 10++++++

this poem deserve an applause!

this is too beautiful noel..as if i want to cry for this.i cant express my admiration for this poem, , this is a very kind poem..a very sensitive and a very adorable to read..this is transparent, we could see how innocents are to be slaughtered...only to find out that innocence saves hearts..this is a confession written in a form of verse..i like this much, promise...