He likes the tone of this one, but not entirely sure; it could be
a little tighter or maybe more to the point. Loose in its construction
the poem fell apart for him in the end; however the good news is
that the majority of the time, he usually hates what he reads….
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Good read Ted! Right on the money! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
the critics are wonderfully satired by Jonathan Swift in his ' Battle of Books'.... well composed thought and very true...Beauty is everywhere, we need proper eyes to see.... **Abha**