Man Of Burden Comments

Suzan, Does this mean that you too have found that dogs are the best people that you have ever met? B.V.A.

This poem is proud, a bit angry, and speaks truth from clean lips. :) Thanks for this, Suzan. Martha

Since Patrick pointed out the poem's more powerful lines, then I shall have place some emphasis on the following: 'What man has come to show / A solid matter / You just don't want to know.' A solid effort, Suzan. Can't argue with your sentiments on the beast known as human. Kindest regards, Greg

A strange yet powerful and somehwhat angry poem, 'For man is a beast Who only looks for a feast To invest and digest The whole of this Earth' I really enjoyed these simple but true lines. Patrick