Wednesday, August 6, 2008

Man In The Street Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am just a man in the street
Who knows my stock, my stint,
My wait and my thoughts?
I see the world as world naked
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Sathya Narayana
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Raj Nandy 13 February 2009

This is a nice & thoughtful poem! 20/10! When you get time, do read my - A Tribute To The Ricksha-pullers Of Calcutta - Raj Nandy

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 15 November 2008

sathya - This poem reveals the source of your voice, your sense of truth. Keep your eyes and your heart open. Blessings - Cheryl

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Reshma Ramesh 18 September 2008

well observed and well penned sir.......good one

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Mamta Agarwal 11 September 2008

you are an observer of life and soak it up like a sponge. what you said about Samuel Johnson is true of you in every sense. 10

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Hades Pandemonium 30 August 2008

Great poem. You seem to be like an onlooker, someone who watches whats happening in front of you. Very lovely: -)

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 August 2008

I was getting ready to give this one a 10 until the last verse. It was rather confusing and unclear in its meaning. So, I gave it a 9. The rest of it was simply wonderful. GW62

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Vijay Gupta 17 August 2008

u r right.i like it thanks.....

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Fay Slimm 13 August 2008

Collect enough meat to feed the hungry poet - wonderful phrases in this work. A trip into your environs which is enlightening and verry well written. Keep up your poectic offerings Sathya, many people need to hear them. Greetings from Fay Slimm.

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Ramesh T A 13 August 2008

Zeal of aspiring poet with full of expectation and ambition is clearly ascertained in this free verse! Never leave such a mood everyday to fulfil your dream! All the best!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 August 2008

A man in the street has freedom to talk more than a man in powers for the latter should guard his tongue for fear of any adverse consequences when he spells a wrong word in public.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 August 2008

that is good going for a man in the street...i think the streets you streak with your feels naked are crowded... impressive lines, satya...10

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ngaio beck 07 August 2008

Well done.A nice wake-up call.

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Indira Babbellapati 07 August 2008

we are all 'man in the street! '

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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2008

A poet with watchful heart indeed.Expect more from you Sathya.write more.Thanks for sharing

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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