I am just a man in the street
Who knows my stock, my stint,
My wait and my thoughts?
I see the world as world naked
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sathya - This poem reveals the source of your voice, your sense of truth. Keep your eyes and your heart open. Blessings - Cheryl
you are an observer of life and soak it up like a sponge. what you said about Samuel Johnson is true of you in every sense. 10
Great poem. You seem to be like an onlooker, someone who watches whats happening in front of you. Very lovely: -)
I was getting ready to give this one a 10 until the last verse. It was rather confusing and unclear in its meaning. So, I gave it a 9. The rest of it was simply wonderful. GW62
Collect enough meat to feed the hungry poet - wonderful phrases in this work. A trip into your environs which is enlightening and verry well written. Keep up your poectic offerings Sathya, many people need to hear them. Greetings from Fay Slimm.
Zeal of aspiring poet with full of expectation and ambition is clearly ascertained in this free verse! Never leave such a mood everyday to fulfil your dream! All the best!
A man in the street has freedom to talk more than a man in powers for the latter should guard his tongue for fear of any adverse consequences when he spells a wrong word in public.
that is good going for a man in the street...i think the streets you streak with your feels naked are crowded... impressive lines, satya...10
A poet with watchful heart indeed.Expect more from you Sathya.write more.Thanks for sharing
This is a nice & thoughtful poem! 20/10! When you get time, do read my - A Tribute To The Ricksha-pullers Of Calcutta - Raj Nandy