tonight that moon looks round and hollow
the old man's face poc-marked and scarred
mirrors my heart in the reflection on the water
craters dig deep and leak into the bottom like an old abandoned well
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whoa, ur poem sinks deep. I love it. I like the imagery and the imagination of ur poem and the use of words.20/10 ^__^
Shannon, this is beautiful... loved it. Such a dreamy poem, filled with great imagery. Keep up the good work! :) Shannon :)