Man In The Moon Comments

GOOD..............................

so, you wrote the poem from the perspective of your dad? your dad was John White, and this was his promise to you, his eldest child: My love for you will never fade................right? very nice. i wonder how often you see the moon and think of him. to MyPoemList. bri :)

My love for you will never fade and every time you glance his way remember dad sends his love your way. when i read these lines i had mixed feelings in me evoking sadness and joy at once. beautiful line dear Annette.thank you

a lovely poem of commitment? ........wonderfully written.

Come hail or rain or sleet or snow outside is the place I'll always go to look above the sky at night to tell the moon and man my plight' beautiful and the moon listens with serene silent beauty

Nice, I think it's cool you write poems like this for others, I find myself doing the same thing, the joy another gets is so worth any effort, thanks for posting.

This is very beautiful, Annette and so movingly written. One of your best. Tom

Wonderful poem, the moonlight dances off your words.