Man In The Mirror Comments

wow that was pretty much amazingg

I admire the core message but I agree with Rebecca Paul, it needs something, though it was quite good.

Marieta Maglas is correct, this poem is a very philosophical view of life. Very good, my compliments. This is Arimoko Konshei.

A very philosophical view and a deep insight

Its not always one of conflict to be whole or into a number of pieces its the feelings that come with them and you showed your feelings with excellence amongst your written words.

wow only one specific thing can hold a person together.....its out there somewhere its just where to look....

well-written (as always) :)

i love how you worded phrases and all but it wasnt my favorite, gotta b honest. nothing really stuck out and captured my attention but it was still extremely well-written and thoughtful.

very well set...nothing so hard as broken pieces to be fixed or a puzzle to be gathered thanks for sharing

After I heard the shatter, I took a step back And realized my dream was just a single shard Among thousands of my blessings I put the pieces together And found that I myself was broken Fragmented over time With hair line fractures on my surface At a moment's notice I'll be ready to crack And when I shattered, The world took a step forward And found a missing piece to the puzzle That could have keep me together. nice one.. arises a curiosity though.. when a mirror shatters all of us hear the sound.. wonder why a shattered man is not heard by his own clan.. and the irony is even the man himself doesn't realize what caused him such a misery.. can't really expect the world to help when all we need is self help..

A very good discription of a shattered existance. A good write. Lynn