Man At The Door Comments

Narcotics or hard drugs are capable of inducing such a deadly hallucinations or else......your in deep trouble........pal. Good job Dillon.

You have certainly followed your imagination and 'run with it' in a highly original way in this strange hallucinatory poem. Quite the Alice in Wonderland happening methinks. Thanks for sharing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

i loved it, definatly my kind of poem, you did a very good job

sorry i didn't comment before Dillon. it was great. but in a twisted way.! ! ! ; ]

this is very well wrote poem great job

I've got to say this was good. I enjoyed reading it

This was extremely creative. I just loved it. A fine display of talent and writing ability. Glad I stopped by. GW62