Man And Nature Comments
As I walked along the path
Crushing grass under with wrath
That wanted to whisper sounds
Left unsaid beyond bounds
...
Read full text
Like somewhere I read this excellent work similar to the classic...keep writing good one
I LIKE THIS A LOT...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP ALL AROUND....SPECIFIC HIGHLIGHTS INCLUDE: Vivid Imagework...Smooth fluxion...Tight Structure '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
A nice construction of each line in the poem. Well done.
well-worked rhyme scheme...aa bb/ cc dd......... i like the enjambment... the poem just flows.. nice write..
Admiring nature is a never ending pleasure. I like the rhythms and wordings. Excellent poem. Anjana
Nature has the most beautiful soothing effect paralleled by no other.Well said in a very soothing manner. Love...TO
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/26/2025 3:42:35 PM # 1.0.0
How beautifully you put a stop to end your poem with moon dissolving your nature watch at the day's end! Good flow of clear water- like words... ten I give!