Here, here, here, Princess
My little puffball
My baby girl wants
a Christmas tree, yet
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In many parts in the poem through out you live a grand daughter there Almedia...that's how the mind commands...imagination just obliging...nice composition...10
Hi Almedia. This reminds me of my mother's relationship with her 6 cats. There's sadness and loneliness conveyed in the poem. The narrator in some ways identifies with the dog. Both of them are experiencing pain, which they must accept. There's a wistfulness in recalling easier times, but there's no going back. The narrator is prepared for 'the change', however. I enjoyed reading it, Almedia.
Princess dig a hole” I’ll bury your bones” Old age necessitates alteration… I’m prepared for the change Useless, beneath the ground. Man and his dog... how true your assertion is almedia... beautifully written and it is fact of the life.. i was moved with you sentence....10 read mine.. m in tears.. an advise to....
Hi Almedia - Does there have to be a reason to write a POEM? ? ? ? In my experience most POEMS arise from passing inspiration. After great personal deliberation - and consultation with third parties - my analysis is as follows: Verse ONE Pampered Puppy Verse TWO Dog and Dotage Verse THREE Death and Decay. Thanks for sharing - Love through Poetry - JOHN
Empathic poem ‘en memoir’ Retrieved from memory cache memory chip and blending one’s girlhood with the Princess Magically crafted… finish is ‘sufferingly yours’ 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
i like it so much! 10 for that it seems a story to me catchy one!
I’ll sweep that Black streak that waves your back...... Someone on Earth tried to play chase with death (the timeless youth! !) and you try with different form and fascination. Here is the youthfulness of a creator. Till the last date of achieving destiny try to dig a hole where we all can bury the blackest prince 'The Death'. At least carry the torch as long as you can. Long you march Regards, prab
Very different, yet very good. Captivates as one reads. Seasons of life? Enjoyed; D